If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
People, all over the world, make their best efforts to improve their ability and strengths during childhood and school time to meet their dream job. They also have a specific beautiful picture that including them in a dream office while wearing a big smile on their face and fashionable clothes. With this in mind, some people think it is better to take away a decent job instead of seeking for more satisfying job, while others believe otherwise. I subscribe to the first opinion on the ground of two main reasons I represent hereunder.
To begin with, I believe that the future is far more unpredictable than we think so no one can predict/foretell future's occurrence and their effect/efficacies on our life, so I think it is rational to evaluate present offers properly and consider them as a bright chance to enter a new environment. I have listened to a famous speech from Steve Jobs a most prosperous person in the tech field that was about the spots in our life, He said: "we may not figure out the spots when we experience it but we should believe that these outspread/diffuse spots indeed connect to each other and build our unique life." Considering this speech the offers we receive now, may learn us precious lessons or prepare us for another appropriate position in the future. Besides, we can make new relationships with the people who are out of our friend-zone, it may make us more pleasant. Also, it is possible to do our best and promote so it makes us closer to our dream job. Therefore, as I mention accepting the offered job tends to have a lot of fortunes in the following and we must be alert to find our chances in the hectic life.
In my opinion, another privilege of accepting a decent job is its financial advantages. Every adult whatever young adults who start to be independent or people who have a family, must pay for the family's living and be responsible. I think in this critical situation people should not run/take a risk by missing the existing job and seeking a satisfying one optimistically since it may take too long or sometimes never happen. The better choice is accepting the present job and earning money for a living however searching for our dream job, so we do not lose any luck. Moreover, if the existing job is well paying, we can save money in order to start our own satisfied business. In addition, working in every environment bring us a lot of experiences which we can enjoy to improve our characteristics in the office and be more accountable about our responsibilities. Imagine a person who wants to be a manager at his or her own restaurant but find a job in a newspaper office as a senior journalist, thus he or she can work there for a period of time to learn more skills like make a proper relationship with other, be responsible, accept our own fault, and make the best effort to progress to learn new things every day that are practical in being prosperous in the future.
To draw a conclusion grounded on the above statements, I believe that join to the present work has some advantages than seeking for better job since the future is unpredictable and we can enjoy the existence job experiences to become more successful in our dream job in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 618, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 3, column 764, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy improving'.
Suggestion: enjoy improving
...ng us a lot of experiences which we can enjoy to improve our characteristics in the office and b...
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Line 3, column 1036, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...st, thus he or she can work there for a period of time to learn more skills like make a proper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, i think, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2659.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 571.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65674255692 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85527052463 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483362521891 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 856.8 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.320333485 48.9658058833 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.411764706 100.406767564 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5882352941 20.6045352989 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266552577974 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975030214198 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688405194837 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184354525404 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494101422073 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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