The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and warm climates.
The diagrams represent some features of edifice configuration for two different types of weather, cool and warm, as well as some characteristics of the house during warm climate for day and night. Overall, as can be seen from these pictures, for various conditions of weather, houses have specific types of the roof and unique used methods to create convenient facilities.
First of all, after having looked at two diagrams, it should be acknowledged that the overriding purpose of building material in cool weather is to keep heat. In addition to this, one excellent quality of building raw, which is internal insulation, helps to avoid huge heat reduction and mainly thermal building material is used to insulate walls and ceiling. Finally, the last outstanding subtlety of the house is the high-angled roof which allows to engulf warm sun rays because there are not any obstacles for the straight direction of sun.
The construction of houses for the warm climate is totally different in comparison with previous ones. The house’s parts, windows and walls, are completely covered by external insulation in order to prevent warm air penetration. Another method to save favorable conditions inside the house is installation of reflection roof material and special shape of roof.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 450, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'engulfing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: engulfing
...se is the high-angled roof which allows to engulf warm sun rays because there are not any...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, so, well, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27317073171 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84202339295 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639024390244 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4290293009 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.125 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281299750351 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121230807897 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123149860392 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192818084915 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971804413976 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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