Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, due to the corporate sector, small businesses are going to shut- down. Some people think that it happens because of growing of supermarkets, whereas others criticize it. According to my perception, small businesses are going to closure because of corporate sectors which I am going to discuss in the further paragraphs.
Local businesses are going to collapse because of the supermarket. Due to hectic schedule supermarkets are more convenient than the small shops. Folks can purchase their all-necessary things under one roof. For example, Costco, The home depot, canadine tire, etc. There is an availability of all brands, grocery, electronic gadgets, and other household things. Instead of going to small shops, people like to buy all the necessary goods from just one shop.
Another thing is that the corporate sectors are more discountable as compare to local stores. For instance, supermarkets always providing such kind of discount ‘like buy one get one free’ or ‘buy two get another one on 50% discount. Moreover, supermarkets are more trustable because there is an equality between quantity and quality. Sometimes, local stores do not provide these kinds of facilities. The corporate sectors also provide cashback facilities with the membership card which is also beneficial to save money.
In conclusion, whatever is discussed so far, I would like to say because of supermarkets, small business is going to closer as these kinds of sectors are more convenient as compare to local shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'get' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...nt like buy one get one free or buy two get another one on 50 discount Moreover sup...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, whereas, another thing, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16317991632 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76028247258 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548117154812 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 239.0 20.2975951904 1177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1234.0 106.682146367 1157% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 239.0 20.7667163134 1151% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 93.0 7.06120827912 1317% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192977637776 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192977637776 0.084324248473 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127184777542 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341770594973 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 122.4 13.0946893788 935% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -179.57 50.2224549098 -358% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 97.7 11.3001002004 865% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.13 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.19 8.58950901804 223% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 97.6 10.1190380762 965% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 98.0 10.7795591182 909% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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