Some people think that secondary school should spend less time on traditional subjects such as history and should spend more time on communication skill and buisness courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people opine that traditional subjects like history has less significance so schools must focus on other subjects such as commmunication skill and buisness related course. I personally agree to given statement because after school, business courses help in future when students find employment and communication is also key part of any profession whereas history can be monotonous subject for students.
The first point to consider why alma matters should lay emphasis on business courses is that once the study is completed, individuasl apply for their job and workplace ethics are new to them. With the help of this course, they are given knowledge how corporate sectors works, business tactics utilised and how buisness world rules and information gained through the course is incorporated in the workplace as well. Moreover, communication is pivotal part of any occupation and essential part of life also. Nowadays, people suffer from trauma and sometimes they are not able to express themselves and they have no one to share their grief with and eventually become victim of stress.
Furthermore, traditional subject such as history is boring for some students and they have no or lesser interest in that. The main reason is that they find it ardous to remember what has happened in past decades. They already have lots to subjects in curicullum to focus on and contemelate that history is not that important due to lack of interest. As a conesquence students cannot be forced to learn the subject they are not ineterested in.
To sum up what have discussed so far, each subject has its own value but the whole concept of eduaction is to bring hosilstic devleopment of students by providng them eduaction in those fields which is fruitful for them in future not making them pressurised to learn anything uninterested.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0635451505 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74842327418 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571906354515 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 299.0 20.2975951904 1473% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1514.0 106.682146367 1419% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 299.0 20.7667163134 1440% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 82.0 7.06120827912 1161% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194967849682 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194967849682 0.084324248473 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114980597313 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837269964514 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 151.9 13.0946893788 1160% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -232.01 50.2224549098 -462% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 119.9 11.3001002004 1061% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.55 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.01 8.58950901804 256% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 121.6 10.1190380762 1202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 122.0 10.7795591182 1132% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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