Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays.
Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?
Manpower is the building blocks of an organization, they work round the clock to achieve success for their company. Some head man seek their workers would work for them even on day off. Definitely, it would be beneficial for both the employers and employee but the disadvantages should not be overlooked. I will shed light on pros and cons of the above statement in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, some prominent corporations have inadequate time to complete large scale projects therefore, they try to contact their staff on all the time or even on holiday and offer astonishing bonus which are beneficial to grow the financial status of the workers. In addition to it, this opportunity will help to make a good image ahead of their boss and to achieve higher position in the company. To elaborate this, working hard and dedication give a good impact on the mind of head man of the corporation which assist to get promotion in future.
On the other hand, as every coin has two phases as there are negative effect also. First and foremost, twenty-four-seven working is bad enough by itself but it is also a common culprit for several diseases, the big ones being diabetes, depression, strokes, high blood pressure and even cancer. Moreover, If anyone spend most of their day at the workplace, family and friends could feel deprived of your presence, love and affection. And often work-related frustration can come out on loved ones, making relationships strained.
To conclude it, long time working give a chance to improve relation with head of the organization and to improve good lifestyle in future but the negative effects are stronger than positive ones, unhealthy body do not provide better outcomes and it also leads to spoil relationship with loves ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: spends
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86912751678 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66235993871 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610738255034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 298.0 20.2975951904 1468% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1451.0 106.682146367 1360% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 298.0 20.7667163134 1435% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 98.0 7.06120827912 1388% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204721901295 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204721901295 0.084324248473 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10596661408 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652330406054 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 150.5 13.0946893788 1149% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -230.99 50.2224549098 -460% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 119.5 11.3001002004 1058% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.45 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.29 8.58950901804 260% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 121.2 10.1190380762 1198% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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