The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following graph depicts how much electricity is needed in an ordinary day of winter or summer in England, with the pie chart illustrating the purposes of electricity usage in a typical English home.
As can be clearly observed from the graph, electricity usage initiates from around 35000 units in midnight of winter days. It experiences a dramatic increase till 3:00 am to nearly 40000. After then, there is a significant decline until 9 o’clock and reaches 30000. From 9:00 onward, electricity demand goes up dramatically to around 50000 at 9 pm and then goes down. Unlike winter days, in summer days electricity usage declines during midnight to 9 am and touches approximately 12000 units. While it rises significantly to nearly 20000 till 13:00, after a remarkable fall at next six hours, it meets 20000 again. Although a considerable fall can be observable at 24:000 to virtually 16000.
Turning to pie chart, the majority of electricity is used for heating purposes, whether rooms or water, by 52.5%. Followed by 17.5% of ovens, kettles, and washing machines. The same percentage of electricity spends on lighting, Tv, radio and vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools which is equivalent to 15%.
Overall, it is clear from the graph that daily demand for electricity in winter is always far mor than summer days, roughly double at any given hours. Meanwhile, most electricity in England households is used for heating, probably it is the reason for high demand of winter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 398, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10204081633 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80365680173 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 106.607317073 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636734693878 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7574006226 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1538461538 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 5.23603664747 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312006202862 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102285274245 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109818853577 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220869395473 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106201846294 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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