Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better ti get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.
The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Firstly, this leads people to become independent and settle down earlier. They start earning money which makes them ready to afford their houses and have families. Another possible reason is to gain more experience. People who started working right after school tend to learn more new skills, which results in promotions on their level.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. The reason why it is better for students to study at college or university is some jobs require academic qualifications. Since job market is becoming more competitive today, many students are required to gain more knowledge for better job opportunities. Another main reason why students should continue their studies is higher salaries they can get. Students can get high-paid jobs easily with a high qualification they have, becoming a useful member of society.
In conclusion, while there are several advantages in working directly after school, I believe that studying at college or university should not also be taken for granted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17621145374 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6524214076 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.354999171 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.3846153846 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272918234473 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100773821709 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895375301341 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184427639998 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678443577857 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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