In 20 year there will more pollution?
There is no doubt in that with the advent of the technology the rise of air pollution always been a heated topic among individuals. It is not easy to concur or oppose this idea with any articulation without considering the perusaive reasons of the choice. Some people may claim that the pollution in the air will be on lower side. However, I think there will be enormous amount of pollution in 20 years from now. The reasons for my choise is based on some reaons which I will elaborate in the subsequent paragraphs.
The first most compelling reason coorborating my idea is associated with the fact that in future there will be more cars in the street which ultimately mean more pollution. To be more specific, the gasoline emission by the car consist of harmful gases which can pollute the air. Gases like hydrogen and sulphur are the main component of gasoline which are known to be a deadly gases. The way cheap care are available for the public, it is unevitable that people would have more cars in future as well. That would ultimately lead to extra pollution in the air. My opinion on this matter has been profoundly explain by my own personal experience. When I look back to 20 years, in my city barely any one could afford the car and the enviornment was less polluted as well. Nevertheless, with car prices went down over the years, I can notice more cars in my city. Now, almost every home at least have one car. Due to this air in my city is not fresh. According to the recent survey, by the geological department of world health, in my city there is thirty percent increase in the air pollution in recent era as compared to twenty years ago. Therefore, this can be concluded that with this trend people would have more cars in the future and more pollution in the air would be.
Secondly, the way manufacturing industries are rising every passing year , chances are more likely that in twenty years there will be more Industries. As the industries releases detrimental gases into the air which pollutes the air. To explain broadly, Industries emit the gases like carbon and nitrogen which plays a fundamental role in polluting the air. I would like to explain my perspective with my city experience. Ten years ago, in my city there was barely any industy, and air was so fresh. However, in recent days there are at least fifty industries in my city. The number rises rapidly with in few years. So it is certain that in 20 years there will be more industry in my city and there will be more pollution in the air. Therefore, I can assume that in my city air will be more polluted in future beacause of the rapid growth of industries.
In conclusion, from the above-mentioned discussion, I surmise that twenty years from now pollution in the air will be on higher side. This is beacause of the rapidly increasing cars in the street and the availibility of more industries in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, at least, i think, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2393.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 518.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61969111969 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5816308502 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.415057915058 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 768.6 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7159532695 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4642857143 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370392876698 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114686819911 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130088282867 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274954459529 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514682401867 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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