Technology has caused and continues to cause more problems than it solves. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In the contemporary day and age, there is a war of words regarding the belief that the rampant use of technology, the world has encountered numerous issues and this trend would continue rather than it solution. An equal number of people opines in favour of the very notion, however others are hesitant to it. The following paragraphs would cast light on my personal perspective along with an suitable example.
I partially welcome to the statement that technology has caused and it would endure. Multifarious reasons are responsible for my outlook. First and most prominent one is that technology innovations have removed the difficulties in our lives as they helps us in doing numerous chores with tremendous ease. As a result, in the past, where a sizeable portion of work used to be done manually. These days appliances and gadgets are at our disposal to share our workload. Secondly, nowadays, mathematical calculation which can solved within a second with the help of calculator. Consequently, it is easy to solve the difficult and hard calculation relating to any field.
On second thought, a couple of reasons drive me to consider the opposite notion as well. The innovation of cars that use fossil fuel has caused some serious effect on the world. Hence, the car produce carbon monoxide which is not dangerous for living creatures. Moreover, it increases the big difference between parents and children with the help of of technology. Therefore, many children would more spent time on social application.
Taking every thing into account, I personally feel that although technology is beneficial for human beings, yet the downside should not be Glossed over.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 390, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20588235294 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84154789924 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661764705882 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7911072283 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12050158152 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331470107946 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444970671252 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582362175634 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306884839758 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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