Some people think it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment for people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As society develops, people are attaching much importance to healthcare. Some individuals stated that humans should give priority to disease prevention when spending on well-being-related issues. Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to take a glance at the aforementioned argument.
It goes without saying that prevention is better than cure, especially in the modern age where the vast majority of therapies cannot totally protect people from dangerous threats like mutation or cancer. Research conducted by the World Health Organisation has shown that humanity is likely to have no cure for illnesses, even cough, in the following years. In fact, investing money in strengthening the human immune system through promoting a healthy lifestyle is what First World nations doing these days. Furthermore, as the underdeveloped countries citizen can barely able to reach medicine because of the high cost, prevention against symptoms seem to be the most effective way to ensure social stability.
On the other hand, there are a majority of diseases humans could not aware of or just having minor information about them, thus, interception makes no sense. To illustrate this, there is an example that is very persuasive: cancer. Cancer appears when some of the body's cells grow uncontrollably and spread to other parts of the body, which means we can hardly aware of having it, especially in the early stages. As a result, developing therapies as well as pharmaceuticals might be the only way to save patient life.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the mentioned argument of funding cash on encouraging a healthy and balanced lifestyle as it guarantees human robustness as well as protects the society from collapse.
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Suggestion: majorities
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...persuasive: cancer. Cancer appears when some of the bodys cells grow uncontrollably and spr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, then, thus, well, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03287987408 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0271789028 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.916666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158374430089 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050194079155 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460212688424 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882825589098 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561279788073 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.