Compared to the past, more people are now studying abroad because it is more convenient and cheaper than before. Do you think this is beneficial to the foreign student’s home country?
Education plays a vital role in growth of an individual. Today many students choose to get educated from overseas to gather vast and affordable resources of knowledge. In my view, this has a positive impact on the native country.
First of all, choosing foreign nation as a new education center, opens up doors for best universities like Oxford, Harvard, MIT, etc., from where, one can learn and adopt innovative ideas which in return, can help his home country. Secondly, if students get recognized globally then they can represent their homeland internationally, for example, Mr. Satya Nadella, CEO at Microsoft, who is amongst the famous Indian personalities, who are representing India on a global level. Lastly, after getting higher studies when people start to earn money, they can send ample amount of it to their family in native country. This will improvise the lifestyle and provide a way to invest this money to their home country.
On contrary, if tutees commit a crime then they can spoil image of their home country as they are the representatives of their nation in foreign. Moreover, if people after their studies do not return to their native country, there will be a shortage of skilled manforce. With developing country, it is an enormous loss of workforce. For instance, students from Germany opt Canada for higher studies due to which Germany has to import people throughout the world for their industries to work at.
In conclusion, although, there are few negatives of studying abroad, it can be clearly seen that positives counteract the negatives on account of a potential academic and economic contributions after coming back, allowing the country and citizens to flourish.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15467625899 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79257418452 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618705035971 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7137278052 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12097687261 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452986537365 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290428467298 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071494213586 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237806474284 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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