Online commerce is getting popular in the world. To what extent do you agree that this way can be used in the future?
Due to the process of modernization, online commerce is no longer a new phenomenon to our society. Its convenience in daily life intrigues the development of means of trades including online websites or apps, transport services,and advertisement. Therefore, online commerce is gaining popularity in the community, not only with the youths but also older ones. In my view, the advantages of this form of commerce outweigh its disadvantages.
On the one hand, online commerce is a tool to minimize the time spent for buying goods. It takes lots of time to wander in the malls,and to glance at the whole while you just need to pick some of them. Online commerce with various choices of styles,and prices will be the best way to save your time in window-shopping and save your budgets because you just find the things you need by typing keywords. Moreover, online commerce helps to create jobs for a group of people in the community. The development of online commerce leads to the development of other services. For example, due to online commerce, there are a number of companies such as Grab, Vietnow, Be,and so on transporting goods by using motorbike riders. Online payment such as Momo, Airpay, Zalopay, etc are also benefited.
On the other hand, online commerce creates a potential market for bad people, or hackers to look for their prey. For example, an unboxed parcel that you threw away without hiding your information could be a risk to a fraud. What's more, the transportation sometimes was cancelled owing to customers' unawareness. Young children may place an order unintentionally.
In conclusion, online commerce is a potential and effective way of trading goods. The use of commerce online should be popularized to everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07317073171 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98101492774 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.876373658 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6470588235 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275862458207 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924452634818 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070024001126 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187890931622 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792562922838 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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