The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea. What are the reasons? What solutions to solve the issue?
It is a public concern that the number of endangered animals is becoming significantly increasing because of human activities around the world. Many people have questioned that the motives behind this issue and some solutions could be taken to address it.
There are several reasons why animal species are in danger of extinction. Firstly, individuals would burn forests to build novel apartments and factories. As a result, they no longer have natural habits to continue living. Secondly, illegal hunting, overfishing, poaching, and trade cause great damage to wildlife. For example, residents in Cao Bang province in Viet Nam hunted lions to make woolen clothes for the rich. This would lead to the danger of lions and create an unstable ecological balance. Finally, they might suffer from pain, stress, or even death as medical breakthroughs using animal testing.
Feasible solutions should be produced to tackle this problem. The first method is that the government should raise money for conservation. The state could support breeding programs and construct centers to investigate animals. The second solution would be to improve the awareness of citizens about protecting animals in the world. Educational organizations should have lectures about the importance of maintaining animals as well as biodiversity. Moreover, people would be encouraged to utilize public transportations or bikes to mitigate gas emissions. Therefore, animals could be reserved as water and air pollution would be facilitated.
In conclusion, animals are in the danger because of some reasons, and solutions should be produced soon to tackle this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nstruct centers to investigate animals. The second solution would be to improve the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53784860558 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89435581753 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4098253808 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.7647058824 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129785419425 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407179799127 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051632794297 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873898964107 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433711077027 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.26 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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