Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Some individuals hold the opinion that firms should cater to local communities with sports and social facilities. Personally, I express a partial disagreement with the notion. While it is not suitable to give them this type of arduous responsibility, companies should use a part of their revenues to fund these constructions.
On the one hand, it is not optimal to force enterprises to support constructing the whole of these facilities. In fact, there are variations in the sizes and incomes of different organizations. Besides, some of them are likely to just start going into business and not able to make revenue. Therefore, requiring these companies to be completely responsible for local development is unfair and illogical and can make them go bankrupt. Consequently, firms should not be in charge of developing local facilities.
On the other hand, corporations should provide money for the development of these facilities. Specifically, as they have decided to establish their locations in local areas, it is the local citizens that they are making profits from. Also, they are exploiting the areas’ natural and human resources. Therefore, it is essential that these companies finance the local development as a means of compensating. All in all, companies should donate a part of the revenues they gain to facilitate the demands of communities.
To conclude, despite controversial schools of thought on determining the role of companies in implementing changes in local sports and social facilities, I endorse the hypothesis that they should allocate financial resources to partly help these transformations since they may be unable to contribute wholly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, while, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42307692308 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23347871732 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.860436801 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213248314691 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713394084151 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646102657805 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134337104174 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316440979228 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.