Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishments.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is widely believed that certain punishments should be established for different type of crime. While this policy might have enormous positive effect, I would argue that the authorities should sometimes consider the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it when proposing the punishment.
On the one hand, there might have two positive impacts when the government introduce fixed punishments for crime. Firstly, it would be easier for the law workers to make judgment and propose punishment as they have a certain base of law. Secondly, with this fixed punishment, the law system could avoid bias towards specific crime and then, make more right decisions. As a result, it would limit the number of crime committed as people bear in their mind that they would certainly be punished severely based on the fixed law.
On the other hand, there are several opinions against this fix punishment, that is, considering the circumstances and motivation when it comes to punishment decisions. While some argue those factors should always be taken into account, I strongly claim that it should depend on specific context. Those elements could be put into practice in the case that crime was unfortunately committed by someone trying to defend themselves or the crime scene could be set up, for example. Moreover, it might be also the case if there is lack of reliable evidence, for instance, no one had the chance to witness that crime.
In conclusion, despite the fact that fixed punishment for each type of crime could be useful for some cases, circumstances and motivations should sometimes be taken into consideration before making final punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18382352941 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7725561264 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540441176471 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4239512718 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.181818182 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6363636364 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.584174685476 0.244688304435 239% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230424221076 0.084324248473 273% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116347729362 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.399441796444 0.151304729494 264% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920730598663 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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