Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some individuals believe that authorities should issue a ban on harmful sports. Others, however, argue that people should be able to freely decide to participate in such activity. Although both views hold a degree of accuracy, I agree with the latter notion because humans and society would experience different levels of benefit.
On the one hand, prohibitions should be implemented against dangerous sports to hamper the possibility of permanent and temporary injuries. In fact, this category of activity usually includes extreme sports that require participants to undergo intensive training and have adept skills and agility. Besides, they are highly demanding on physical stamina. Failing to fulfill any of these prerequisites may make the players badly injured or even dead. Therefore, it is logical for the players to be prohibited from taking part in these exercises.
On the other hand, it is evident that these physical recreations can help to reduce stress from participants. It is scientifically proven that more and more people have come down with a diversity of psychological problems in the modern era. In order to deal with this, many individuals choose to engage in extreme sports for the pleasure and contentment that resulted from. In this way, they can feel more refreshed and happy, which positively impacts their daily life and work. Consequently, the number of mentally ill people can be greatly reduced and the life quality can be improved.
To conclude, despite controversial schools of thought on determining whether dangerous sports should be banned or not, I endorse the hypothesis that people can indulge in their own favorite activity. Not only would this does good to their mental health but it also mitigates the crisis of mental illnesses that is ever-increasing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32280701754 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87837801869 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624561403509 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.064253013 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.133333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210901384207 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616035741545 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058840395284 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123739571289 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312209694036 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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