Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words Do not use memorized examples
No one can deny that there is a discussion on both sides. However, I firmly believe that students are hugely influenched by their teacher rather than their friends. I will provides several reasons and explanation for supporting this side in the subsequent paragraphes.
In the begin, discipline is a virtue which is introduched by teachers in the earlier stages of student's life. Without this student can't survive in the long run of the life. For instace, if in my early life i van not learnt this, for sure i would not reach in my current position. Due to this, now i am researcher and discipline is the key in the field of research. No one can done any quality research without this virtue. If I had not cultivated this in my life, I never would have been a researcher. So, my teacher has the biggest influence in my life to be a researcher by giving this leassen. For this reason, it's my firm believe teachers have the capabilites to influenced student's life more.
Secondly, direction of life is mostly projected by teachers. Because, a teacher can understand his student more than anyone. They always understand the strength and weakness of the students. As a result, they can provide the valuables advices to the students which can help the students to choose their career directies. Form my personal experience I can say this, one of my teacher said me that I can be a scientist in future because i have a good analysing skills. This was the big inspiration and help for me to choose my career. Sometimes I think, If the teacher didn't give this advice, it would be struggling journey for me. This teat explain the role of the teachers in student's life.
In conclusion, ignoring the other sides, now I can confidently say this that teachers are the biggest influencer in student's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...acher rather than their friends. I will provides several reasons and explanation for sup...
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...de in the subsequent paragraphes. In the begin, discipline is a virtue which is introd...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... of students life. Without this student cant survive in the long run of the life. Fo...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... life. For instace, if in my early life i van not learnt this, for sure i would n...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ly life i van not learnt this, for sure i would not reach in my current position....
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n my current position. Due to this, now i am researcher and discipline is the key...
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Message: Did you mean 'do' or 'be done'?
Suggestion: do; be done
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...y giving this leassen. For this reason, its my firm believe teachers have the capab...
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Suggestion: to journey
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Suggestion: explains
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71746031746 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73055368129 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6579725411 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.3 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112194788271 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439137198902 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457784900556 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878565086128 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289477533696 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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