You forgot a wallet at a friend's place while you were there on the weekend. Write him a letter to ask to return the wallet.
Dear Mathew,
It was a great evening at your place on the weekend.We enjoyed thoroughly every moment, particularly food and games.The games were completely outstanding with utmost entertainment involved. However, this didn't last for long as I had much difficulty while returning from your home because I forgot my wallet.I had nothing with me to pay to the driver, so went home walking which was so exhausted due to the distance. Thankfully, one of your friend leaves nearby my area so he offered me a lift from midway and could reach home finally.
Also, wallet has credit and debit cards through which I need to make payment by this week for various things.It has my driving license, some cash and pan card as well. Without this, it will be very difficult for me to go anywhere, office in particular. So I am writing this letter to tell you that if possible, please return it by today evening while coming back from office.
I know you will understand and do the needful as soon as possible.
Best Regards,
Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mathew, It was a great evening at your place on ...
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Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...at evening at your place on the weekend.We enjoyed thoroughly every moment, partic...
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Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ery moment, particularly food and games.The games were completely outstanding with ...
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...t entertainment involved. However, this didnt last for long as I had much difficulty ...
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Line 2, column 308, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...om your home because I forgot my wallet.I had nothing with me to pay to the drive...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...payment by this week for various things.It has my driving license, some cash and ...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t by this week for various things.It has my driving license, some cash and pan ca...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this evening' is used.
Suggestion: this evening
...u that if possible, please return it by today evening while coming back from office. I know...
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Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and do the needful as soon as possible. Best Regards, Mark
^^^
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ul as soon as possible. Best Regards, Mark
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, so, well, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73033707865 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57374505647 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.724719101124 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.506559786 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205640489195 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700155024717 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621724599534 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120088690936 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234703211212 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.