In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are less happy.
What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
In many parts of the world, although the youth make more money and process better health conditions, they are not as satisfied as they were in the past. Thus, it is the aim of this essay to unveil the reasons behind this phenomenon and propose solutions to tackle it.
The main causes of the degradation of happiness among young people are independence and the stress from making ends meet. To begin with, parents are sometimes so caught up in their jobs that they have little time for their offspring. As a result, children grow up and are liable to make a decision themselves. They, in turn, from the lifetime habit of doing everything on their own; moreover, what is even worse is that some choose to isolate themselves and enjoy the feeling of solitude. This culminates in the decrease in people’s frequency of communicating, which is one of the most crucial factors leading to unhappiness. Another justification worth mentioning is that the youth have a propensity for neglecting their mental health as they can not allocate sufficient time to relax and get rid of their hectic workload. For example, some would opt for working overtime instead of going on a holiday because by proving that they are devoted to their companies, they can climb the promotion ladder more easily. What can be inferred from this is that the lack of free time due to making a living causes unhappiness among young people.
However, measures can be taken to provide solutions to the trend. One of them is parents equipping children with their supervision. Not only does this help the youth to develop fully but the parents can also keep children on the right track by giving them advice. Another solution is that people should prioritise and treasure their relationship with others; furthermore, they are necessitated to concentrate less on jobs and money. By doing so, the youth can spend more time on entertaining and strengthening their bonds with others; consequently, it works wonders for their recreational processes and increases positive emotions.
In conclusion, I believe too much self-sufficiency and overwhelming workload result in the problem. However, we can curb it by looking after our children and saving more time for ourselves as well as our beloved ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01591511936 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79251771651 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554376657825 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0724371222 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.235294118 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1764705882 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188115262257 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595839959472 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439188051976 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977577799037 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553435621474 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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