Line graph in the future

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Line graph in the future

Submitted by Ha An on Sat, 07/10/2021 - 23:09

The graph depicts the three major languages which are studied by students from over the world between 2020 and 2030.
Overall, it is likely that the numbers of students are going to increase over ten years. On the other hand, in the period of 2024-2026, English language will decrease but it is not remarkable
In 2020, roughly 550 millions, English language was the highest in three main languages, rising to nearly 750 millions and higher than Mandarin language nearly 150 millions in 2030.In contrast, only about 600 millions students are going to study Mandarin language at the same time, following by approximately 500 millions who will learn in Spanish language. Especially, in the period of 2020-2026, a increase of three major languages are moderate whille learning Spanish and Mandarin languages could the same as rate exactly 300 million in 2024 and increase about 350 million in 2026 .The most obvious point is the Mandarin language began the lowest rate in begining, but in 2026 may overtake the Spanish language and remain stable at this figure,higher about 100 million than Spanish in 2030
By contrast,the number of people who will learn Spanish language in the opposite direction.After that,despite growing steadily at the same rate in 2026,the figure then may downward in the next four years.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...in language nearly 150 millions in 2030.In contrast, only about 600 millions stude...
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...nts are going to study Mandarin language at the same time, following by approxima...
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...4 and increase about 350 million in 2026 .The most obvious point is the Mandarin l...
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...and increase about 350 million in 2026 .The most obvious point is the Mandarin lang...
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...anguage and remain stable at this figure,higher about 100 million than Spanish in 2030 ...
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...illion than Spanish in 2030 By contrast,the number of people who will learn Spanish...
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...nish language in the opposite direction.After that,despite growing steadily at the sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, then, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14485981308 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63027666128 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556074766355 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 16.3608247423 324% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 233.363986082 44.8134815571 521% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 275.25 76.5299724578 360% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.5 16.8248392259 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.5 4.34317383033 265% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0152533651199 0.216113520407 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0217530873761 0.0766984524023 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376774525569 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0217530873761 0.12726935374 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376774525569 0.0580467560999 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.5 8.37731958763 352% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 70.7449484536 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 7.45979381443 306% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.42 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 8.54432989691 272% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 8.15463917526 282% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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