many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugar products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, people are set to risk themselves having some health problems due to using beverages or foods that contain high levels of sugar. While I am an advocate lean on the idea that such sweet products should increase its costs to discourage users, many people believe it is not an ideal idea.
There are some reasons that propose this action but the most probable is the company profit. The first principle of companies is profit, which will be reduced if they increase the price of those products. Moreover, they can be left behind among their competitors because people will buy other products. For example, Coca company is the company manufacturing soft drinks which contain a high level of carbohydrate. If they make products more costly, people might hesitate and consider buying other beverages.
Those disadvantages are outweighed by many benefits when such products become more expensive. People may wonder about its reasons and will search for it on the internet. As a result, they will know the purpose which informing them about many health problems they can deal with when they use sweets. Namely, obesity and diabetes are two probable problems that sweet products can cause. This can also be true with the parent whose children constantly use pester power to persuade them to buy.
In conclusion, many sugary goods can have some serious health problems if being overused. By increasing the costs of those products can partly deter buyers from encountering those problems though it can be detrimental for such companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0625 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47940737627 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59765625 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9440189551 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267235381713 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878495292777 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588559673059 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161110960122 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494651923576 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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