Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by some individuals that we should focus on discovering options to live with climate changes rather than trying to prevent it. In my opinion if we do not stop the climate changes now, its outcomes wil be perilous in coming days. I completely disagree to the aforementioned statement.
Firstly, although the climate diversity seems to be quite natural, but it does not actual real. Myriad reasons for this predicament. Particularly, several reasons of pollutions are responsible for the reckless, deforestation excessive industrialization and plastic waste rapidly contributed into growth of global warming.
Secondly, as days go by the people do not adjust to the new atmosphere. It will be full of calamities as well as contaminations. As the result, an abundance of animals will be a common scenario in near the future. Which is already started happening. Human lives also will be endangered, many of diseases will spread out, due to lack of immunity, they do not able to fight against it. So in order to live place better for safe and sound environment. To illustrates, the sea water level of Antarctica, melting rapidly. The area's of land undergoing into the water.
To recapitulate, the preventing of upcoming disaster is very essential. Global warming is a result to toughtless actions of mankind which will eventually end the lifes on earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e a common scenario in near the future. Which is already started happening. Human liv...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing is a result to toughtless actions of mankind which will eventually end the li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13004484305 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13137443332 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681614349776 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6015316829 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9375 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171468228629 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445002406524 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645631188011 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950793167502 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101656253182 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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