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Thanks to the popularity of advertisements, many companies these days could attract and inform their customers that they have the most cutting-edge products. It is undeniable that there are some motives for business to do this, and I believe it is a negative trend.
There are some reasons why companies want to transmit a message that they have an initial product. Firstly, this tendency perhaps stems from the curiosity of the customers. It is because people usually want to experience new items, so this method could be useful to provoke their curiosity. As a result, many products will be purchased and could be sold out. Secondly, it is impossible for start-ups to replace the remaining companies who have many executive products with numerous loyal customers. Therefore, launching in the market with different product segments could be a useful method.
Despite some convincing reasons which were mentioned above, I still believe that this trend will have some detrimental impacts on both companies and customers. From companies’ perspective, it would be better if that amount of money would be invested in improving the qualities, the packages or the features of their products. By doing that, the companies could actually attract loyal customers, and mouth-of-advertising is perhaps the most effective method to reach a new market segment. From customers’ angle, people could be spoilt for choices as many companies convey a message that they have the most modern and useful products. This will result in the lack of trust in the advertisements, resulting in many advertised high-quality products being overlooked by customers.
In conclusion, I agree that advertisements are the best tool to reach new customers, however, companies should allocate money to upgrade their products instead of convincing their customers that they have the latest ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37542662116 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00539416505 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515358361775 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5301600978 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.085139114821 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347187950459 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668474137208 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651778430595 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656015004264 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.