You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
To share information in scientific research, business and the academic world is good but some of that information was too important or too valueble so we need to consider which information we can share. You can see there are so much of the knowlegdes of science, buniness, and the academic world on the earth. You should know that all of this information couldn' t be true. There are many fake news, and we can't suddenly know that it 's a truth or it is lying you. Therefore to be share freely this kind of info is too dangerous for everyone. Some national security secret can be disclosed by a touch of your finger under some evil plan of terrorist element or crimes. Now, goverments are trying to stop sharing wrong news. People who share this fake news can be fined 2 millions dong. It's a big money. Today. the world are having to fight with a kind of virus Sar-cov-2. At the first time to fight this virus many untruth videos, reports, advertisments had been shared to everyone in the country, and they made all of us nervours, worried and confuse. A week later, the authers of these had been fined and punished under the law. In the other hand, it 's really good if we share sucessful and right information. For examples, you can share the beauty of our earth ;or negative, positive of mordern transports....... The more high technology we develop, the more we need to careful. So what do you think, please give some idea. Have a nice day
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much fake news', 'a good deal of fake news'.
Suggestion: much fake news; a good deal of fake news
...information couldn t be true. There are many fake news, and we cant suddenly know that it s a ...
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Line 1, column 407, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... true. There are many fake news, and we cant suddenly know that it s a truth or it i...
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Line 1, column 464, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...w that it s a truth or it is lying you. Therefore to be share freely this kind of info is...
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Line 1, column 785, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...fake news can be fined 2 millions dong. Its a big money. Today. the world are havin...
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Line 1, column 789, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'big money'.
Suggestion: big money
... news can be fined 2 millions dong. Its a big money. Today. the world are having to fight w...
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Line 1, column 809, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... millions dong. Its a big money. Today. the world are having to fight with a kind o...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, therefore, as to, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57372216867 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2553760205 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3529411765 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26427018576 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712940403764 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802715442222 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26427018576 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.