Some people believe that the children at secondary school should be streamed, i.e. taught in classes according to ability, rather than being taught in mixed-ability classes. Do you think the advantages of streaming students at secondary schools outweigh the disadvantages?
Classifying students according to their mental ability has become a popular trend among secondary schools these days. Some parents suppose that pupils should be taught in streaming classes .Other people believe that these children should be studied in mixed- ability classes. This essay will indicate the benefits and drawbacks of these cases.
With respect to this controversial issue, one of the primary advantages is that adolescents are streamed in the same levels , the tutors are able to figure out the best strategies to enhance logical thinking .For instances , If the excellent student are taught at the pace that is quit in adequate for them, they can probably not show what those actually are good at. Moreover , it is clear that these students are separated in advanced class, may support each other to tackle the exercise more quickly.
Conversely, streaming class can also suffer disadvantages,it is possible that adolescents will be marked in the wrong class and can not have a higher academic achievement . Furthermore , these children are potentially not only lacking general knowledge but also under pressure in streaming class. Beside that, students in advanced class are obliged to compete with their classmate.Unless they keep up with their friends , children will probably be disappointed in themself and not interested in the education pathway.
All in all , steaming classes have both advantages and disadvantages . I suppose that the drawbacks have overshadowed the benefits
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, conversely, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, for instance, i suppose, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4525862069 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88636341267 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.5010857075 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377468257065 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122108571428 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113377833665 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194879052949 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121214003855 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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