Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health. Others believe that the Government should make sure that their citizens are healthy. Discuss both views
It is often argued that individuals have the responsibility for their health condition and nutrition in meals, while others claim that governments should ensure well-being for citizens. Although each view has its justification, I agree with the former one.
On the one hand, there are some explanations why governments are responsible for people's health. To begin with, residents pay monthly taxes for authorities to work. As a result, people's health must be one of the top priorities and needed to pay more attention. In addition, if the government ensures citizens' healthy lifestyles, the national economy will be grown stably. For instance, the administrators provide balanced diets for employees so that productivity and quality products are received.
On the other hand, each person has to care for their health better than authorities for a number of reason. First, only individuals know what their bodies required. To be more detailed, eating healthy foods and do exercise every day helps people to have perfected health and avoid old-aged diseases. Another reason is people may have a high living standard due to the qualification of health. It means that people are no longer living under pressure which can affect their physical and mental health. Therefore, they can have more happiness and choices in their lives, such as buying luxury items or food.
To wrap up, both governments and individuals will be responsible for the healthcare of citizens and themselves. From my perspective, people ought to take care of themselves as soon as possible, starting with daily routine and ending up with a healthy, strong body.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27586206897 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86490650089 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8889740611 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284135680209 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926476777074 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607325610417 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167417660859 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313929661415 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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