Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is not rare that in the sports sector of news forecast, people are informed about the random sports players who died tragically during the performance of extreme sports, especially sky diving and motor racing. However, I opposing the prohibition of this kind of sports as apart from dangers, the advantages it brings are enormous.
Firstly, extreme sports enhance the mental sharpness inside each person and assist in expanding their limits. Jumping from an incredible height or going down from a slippery and snowy hill requires people to keep calm and be intrepid, thereby gradually becoming familiar with confronting obstacles. By this way, extreme sports players are capable of tackling daily pressure as well as improving their confidence and stepping out of the comfort zone. Scientifically speaking, people who often do extreme sports are more likely to succeed and live jocundly compared to those who don’t dare to give it a try. Moreover, studies and researches have proved that constant contact with extreme sports significantly reduces the likelihood of a heart attack and also decreases the blood pressure.
Secondly, just like another kind of sports, people gain a well-built body through participating in extreme sports. Extreme sports present such a demanding challenge that people become physically fit and strong since they have to work out different muscles. For instance, if they want to go skiing, they must practice stretching the legs and arms beforehand to guarantee that no unexpected accidents will occur. Needless to say, by joining these activities, they can get to interact with more people whose hobbies are similar to have more fun and improve the social skill such as communication and the need to be integrated.
To sum up, I fiercely believe that extreme sports cannot be banned since it is not only a way of entertainment, it is a challenge for somebody who feels their life is not interesting enough or that they are still disoriented about the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, apart from, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17956656347 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74489590106 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616099071207 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6026648003 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.416666667 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200045413068 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702157848411 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318926349615 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119317189672 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029897001101 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.