Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; others have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. Which is better?
Give the advantages of each and support your viewpoint.
Leaning different languages is such a talent . It is amazing if you get to now them in your own country . Everyone should have their own language centres for students who are willing to learn them . If you go to other country where people speak alternative language then yours so it is significant for you to learn it before you go there . This essay will discuss about leaning numerous languages in your city is very benefical in life.
Thousands of students have a dream to study abroad . There is nothing wrong in it . Every person have right to chase their life goals . For instance , when i just graduated my school i always had a dream to work as a pharmacist in united states . My native language is not english .furthermore , i enrolled myself in a class where foreign teacher teaches us . When i got a chance to move out . To know their language became so advantageous for me . At that time it was so easy for me to understand them . I was so afraid that if i dont knoe their language how i elaborate myself what i want to say. It was a piece of cake for me to talk to them so fluently.
secondly , if you speak multitude languages who can get a highly paid job . this is something that very few people do . for example , one of my cousin learned 20 languages . He got a job as a translator of vice president of the state .In addition, he travels all arounf the globe and get paid for that .
Third, it is good if government add atleast one of the foreign language in school . At growing age it is fascinating for students to learn other languages .For instance , to be a bilingual is good . You can get prioritize on those who knows only native language.However , me and my friend applied for same job position and she gets that job .because company needs workers who speaks two languages.
In my opinion it is mesmerizing to get knowledge about alternative languages . it helps you to find a good job . otherwise it can be so challenging if you dont learn it before and in educational field it makes you distinctive from others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46883468835 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67173662143 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1367661876 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.96 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.76 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.56 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 55.0 5.5376344086 993% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234349181884 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695118854489 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620518769772 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130963612812 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769556834956 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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