You have a spare room in your flat or apartment and you want to rent it to a student. Write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college. In your letter:
• Explain where your apartment is
• Describe the room
• What kind of person would you like to rent it to.
Dear Sir,
I am Sajith and studying in 3rd year of medicine in Mumbai University. I want to tell you about a vacant room in my apartment and can rent it out to a student who wish to stay.
My flat is located near Raheja Classics,which is so easy to find out.It is in a prime locality of Andheri (West), Mumbai.There are plenty of facilities in and around my vicinity.The flat is fully equipped with all amenities.It has a garden,swimming pool,gym,library etc.It is just a 5 minutes walk from metro station and 10 mins away,there is a bus stand.
Also,my vacant room is spacious.It has an attached bathroom with washing machine and geyser.
it has large windows, big balcony and partially furnished with cupboard and study table.Internet facility is common for all inmates.
I would like to rent it to a person or a student who keen keep the flat in up to date condition.A roomamte who doesn't drink and strictly no non-veg.cooking, preferably an Asian.
Please help me with any such student you know with their contact details.
Yours sincerely,
Sajith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...heir contact details. Yours sincerely, Sajith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81868131868 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11131194927 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675824175824 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.9340692986 44.8134815571 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.625 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157843749707 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725451254666 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702855851287 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635912409391 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052205555667 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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