People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the youth and newly-married couples have the propensity to postpone their plan to have a child until they get up to older ages. From my own perspectives, the advantages completely outweigh the alleged drawbacks.
The most obviously significant trade-offs are pertinent to maturity, the well-being of a romantic relationship and health concern. A number of people, after giving birth and experiencing parenthood at later ages, regretted their former decisions on children as becoming parents and taking the responsibilities for all aspects of a human’s life prerequire excessive commitment. Therefore, it stands to reason that the moment your babies start crying is the life-altering milestone a defining moment of adulthood. In addition, a childless marriage can jeopardize your harmony given that once you have a child from the onset, both spouses will strive to contribute to a harmonious family for their children’s sake. Furthermore, it is exceedingly more difficult to give birth at old age however, due to the advance in science the possibility still exists. What is more, women who have kids at later life might be prone to numerous possibly permanent health risks.
Nevertheless, those aforementioned disadvantages pale in comparison with the merits of delaying childbirth. The first and foremost one is relevant to economic stability. Apparently, the majority of parents are still contriving to make their livelihood. Therefore, with a new-born babies, it is unlikely for them to reconcile between belonged working hours, household expense and baby sitting time, catering to fundamental needs. As a result, they will feel overburdened and culminating in blaming and showing animosity towards kids, their self-thought culprits. On the contrary, parents who are firmly established in their careers, earn decent salaries, and have savings set aside have both the time and energy to devote to raising their children well without having to stress about making ends meet. Moreover, there is an aphorism that old age comes wisdom, which is perfectly applied in these circumstances. An older individual will certainly have more experiences, more precious lessons to be passed down. Whereby, an adolescent will receive a better upbringing.
In conclusion, despite perceived shortcomings, it is undeniable that having a child at older ages will offer us greater benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55890410959 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1217323693 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6276226583 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.722222222 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194409692871 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503016867853 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483821674958 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130177022168 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304346926314 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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