Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. what are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?
A number of people prefer to spend money rather than saving it. This essay will argue that
captivating advertisements and the influence of peers are the biggest reasons behind this phenomenon and
In my opinion, it is a positive development as long as wealth is spent wisely.
The main reason behind spending a substantial amount of finance is the attractive commercials. That is to say, people are more dependent on media these days, which exposes them to the adverts represented in an alluring manner, and they cannot stop following it and shell out money on various kinds of goods and services. A recent study has shown that about 65% of individuals buy things after watching them on social media. Apart from this, humans are more affected by the surrounding masses. In other words, if any person buys a product that seems appealing, others will definitely make efforts to purchase that particular piece to show others that they are from the elite class even they do not need it.
In my view, devoting a limited amount to accessing items is definitely a good idea. As employees work around the clock to
lead a luxurious life, they should use their funds to acquire all facilities for their comfort. However, one should not payout on
useless utilities because saving a budget is essential to use them in emergencies that occur owing to unexpected events.
For example, in the case of medical treatment, a person might have to need a large sum of cash to treat themselves well which
might not be possible without having savings.
On balance, the trend of using funds on appropriate things is burgeoning these days. Promotion of objects and effect of friends are the foremost reasons for this. I believe that it is a positive development which helps people to lead a better life. Nevertheless, one should ensure that one has a proper amount of backup to use on sudden accidents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ent as long as wealth is spent wisely. The main reason behind spending a substa...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an alluring manner" with adverb for "alluring"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...exposes them to the adverts represented in an alluring manner, and they cannot stop following it and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, for example, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90062111801 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63136409552 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599378881988 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8679222214 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212305357806 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698429493643 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911228075265 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797173475479 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942520389345 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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