You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this to ask for two weeks off to complete the "Open Roads" designer course.Though,this is a distance learning programme, it will not affect the work totally. Still, I require few days to finish the same. At the end of this, I will have an exam as well,which if passed with good score, can benefit me and company also. As a principal designer, this is going to help in future.
I am fully aware about the deadlines of the upcoming projects.We have to finish them by the end of this month.So to do the same, I will do overtime later. Also, will come to the office during Saturdays so that submission won't get delayed.
Once I achieve the desire score, an institute will give me an international certificate which is valid anywhere. By adding this during the biding process, it will help in getting more work. This software is more efficient and faster which will help to minimise the efforts.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.I am sure you will support me.
Yours faithfully,
Nilesh
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- You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call Write a letter to company Complaining about this Giving your reasons Asking for bill to be change 78
- Some people argue that arts such as paintings and music are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 61
- Ask your boss for a week time off for your honeymoon 78
- Write a letter to the friend asking advice for an employment opportunity in his country Why you are looking in his country describe qualification and skills ask some questions about salary benefit culture etc 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this to ask for two weeks o...
^^^
Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Though
... 'Open Roads' designer course.Though,this is a distance learning programme, ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...;Open Roads' designer course.Though,this is a distance learning programme, it wi...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to programme'
Suggestion: to programme
...urse.Though,this is a distance learning programme, it will not affect the work totally. S...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...end of this, I will have an exam as well,which if passed with good score, can benefit ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...this, I will have an exam as well,which if passed with good score, can benefit me ...
^^
Line 2, column 336, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... good score, can benefit me and company also. As a principal designer, this is going...
^^^^
Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...incipal designer, this is going to help in future. I am fully aware about the deadlines ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
... the deadlines of the upcoming projects.We have to finish them by the end of this ...
^^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...to finish them by the end of this month.So to do the same, I will do overtime late...
^^
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ooking forward to hearing from you soon.I am sure you will support me. Yours fa...
^
Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you will support me. Yours faithfully, Nilesh
^^^
Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...support me. Yours faithfully, Nilesh
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72527472527 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73509397301 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8706936004 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1818181818 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166115414665 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550069500524 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533828649643 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978796731453 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476845999286 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.