‘The primary goal of education is to get a job’
What is education? Just a student reading textbooks and craming information for he or she to be assessed at particular intervals in a process which we call examination? What is the final goal of education? Just landing a job in a dream company? I think education of an individual goes way beyond these basic questions. Therefore, I disagree with the given prompt that the sole purpose of education is to simply procure employment.
Firstly, education is a pivotal part of a human being's personality. It is what defines who he or she truely is. To start with, during our schooling phase, we learn a wide variety of subjects like English language, Geography, History, Mathematics. Even though these subjects might not reflect in our jobs, but a deep and thorough understanding of these basic topics, help us become a more holistic individual and live in an ever-growing society. Then once we reach college, we have to take important decisions of choosing our majors. Taking these key steps in our lives are all a part of the education process and prepare us for the real world that we will face in our near futures. Hence, education is a principle factor in shaping a person's personality and honing his or her values.
Secondly, someone might argue that even if we study and procure an education, it finally boils down to our jobs that we do on a day to day basis. But there is another aspect we are missing here. Jobs are constantly changing. Due to new technological advancements, earlier jobs which used to have massive volume of employees now only have a couple of them that to just for monitoring and reporting purposes. Factory workers, book-keeping accountants and alike are few professions that have been supplanted by their technologically advanced counterparts. Hence, if an individual is just trained and not thoroughly educated to get a particular job, his or her career will never be able to sustain a constantly metamorphizing market.
Lastly, the goal of human existence and survival is to research, to explore and go above and beyond our current understanding of our surroundings. If the greatest minds of our time would have just educated themselves to land a comfortable and secure job, the world as we know it would be completely different. For example, if Albert Einstein would have just continued to work as a patent clerk in a insignificant corner in Germany, we would still be unaware that our universe is constantly expanding and time in not absolute! If S. Ramanujan, the genius mathematician would have just continued with his job in India as a manual calculation clerk, we would not have had the erudite formulas that today help us to understand the begining of our cosmos and singularity of black holes.
Hence, due to the above reasons, I conclude stating that education is a driving force of the cognitive power of our species, and is way more significant than just procuring employment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
... education is a pivotal part of a human beings personality. It is what defines who he ...
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Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...tion is a principle factor in shaping a persons personality and honing his or her value...
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... continued to work as a patent clerk in a insignificant corner in Germany, we wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, i think, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2434.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 494.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92712550607 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97714856779 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532388663968 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 779.4 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3426159106 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.416666667 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187499036528 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690180814125 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734301373146 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112003134571 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616435816433 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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