Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas are used in many countries. The use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power is encouraged. Is this trend a positive or negative development?
Ever since fossil fuels were discovered, they have become extremely helpful to society's development. Humans use fossil fuels to run motors in cars, or to generate electricity in thermal power stations and many more as fossil fuels play a crucial role in various industries. As the demand of energy worldwide is increasing, the strains on the existing and already limited resources also sky-rocket. With the advancement in the technology field, alternative sources of energy such as wind or solar power are now capable of replacing fossil fuels and switching to these type of energy are strongly encouraged. In my opinion, this trend is a positive development. In this essay, I plan to support my statement with clear evidences and examples.
Firstly, by alternating coal and oil with wind or solar power in certain circumstances, the use of unrenewable resources can be significantly reduced so that we can invested more of them in more important projects such as space explorations or prehistoric researches. Nowadays, most fossil fuels are utilised in transporting or generating electricity, which can be quite wasteful as renewable energy sources perform just as well. A research shows that in 2014, the USA consumed the most oil with just under 1 billion litre, most of which spent of producing petrol for cars. Overall, reducing the use of fossil fuels benefits humanity by saving energy sources for industries in which coal and oil are irreplaceable.
Moreover, overusing and over-exploiting fossil fuels cause multiple types of pollutions. Exhaust gas emitted by car engines engine discharges large amounts of poisonous gas such as carbon dioxide, hydrogen sulfide, carbon monoxide, etc. and many more. These toxic chemical compounds can lead to air pollution and harm people's health if they are usually exposed to it, causing respiratory issues and even lung cancer. According to a study, exhaust gas from motor engines in general shoulders the responsibility is responsible for 30% of air pollution in Hanoi. Exploiting oil under the ocean damage the living habitat of many sea creatures and transporting oil on ships pose a threat in catastrophic oil leaking accidents, which kills innumerable animals yearly. In general, using fossil fuels harm us in many aspects..
Another positive aspect about switching to renewable energy resources is that we are less dependent on fossil fuels. Countries such as Japan and Germany are not abundant in coal or oil. Because of that, they are totally dependent on the USA or UAE to import energy sources. This process of course costs enormous amount of money. Furthermore, fossil fuels need millions of years to form, it is universally acknowledged that they are running out. If we start investing into these alternative energy sources now, we will not have worry about the energy shortage anymore.
In conclusion, encouraging countries' governments to start developing alternative sources of energy in my point of view, is a positive move as it bring about many beneficial merits both at the moment and in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, in general, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2577.0 1615.20841683 160% => OK
No of words: 492.0 315.596192385 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23780487805 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90879365729 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 176.041082164 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54674796748 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 828.9 506.74238477 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1403550651 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430309577331 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104350017465 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764008342725 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218853712253 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526101379879 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 78.4519038076 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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