A serious problem affecting countries right across the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses. Why do many countries face water shortage, and what could be done to tackle the problem?
In our fast-paced society, despite the technological advances, there still exist some countries that have a water crisis. They don’t have enough water for daily uses such as household chores, health adaptation, or agriculture. In my opinion, the issues still occur because of various reasons and the writing below will discuss both natural effects and human causes.
First of all, the countries with water crises are in areas with an extreme environment and the local residents naturally lack water due to weather conditions. In other words, these locations are near the sun so the high temperature leads to the lack of precipitation and annual droughts. In consequence, streamflow starts to diminish and causes a shortage of water. As a result, these countries do not have enough water for daily uses for a long period of time. According to recent research, about 10 percent of the global population or 40 percent of desert residents do not have access to safe water resources and it causes thousands of children to die daily. In brief, nature is one of the reasons for the water crisis so other countries should take these problems under consideration and solve the global issues.
On the other hand, the lack of clean water is due to the irresponsibility of a proportion of the global citizens. Specifically, some people are still wasting water with unconscious habits. For example, making a cotton T-shirt costs gallons of water that can be used by a single person for days. Meanwhile, we misuse a large number of clothes and equipment without realizing the natural resources that had taken part in the manufacturing process. Furthermore, various industries are willing to contaminate water by dumping trash and chemicals directly into the water sources in order to utilize the annual incomes. They neglect the environmental threats and cause water crises just for their personal purposes. Therefore, the government should issue laws and penalties for these companies with the purpose of eliminating water problems.
Summarily, the water crisis has always been a serious problem to many countries across the globe; therefore, global citizens should together come up with solutions and solve this issue. For example, the government can supply purified water for extreme areas or establish environmental organizations in order to help people with difficult situations or to raise the citizens' awareness about the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28608247423 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84194452575 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559278350515 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9113601205 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.944444444 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.104336280864 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631386534545 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196068687869 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525983551522 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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