In some countries, men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?
It is a fact that some couples in several countries tend to have offspring late in their lives. This essay will discuss the reason for this development and analyze why I believe that this has more drawbacks than benefits.
In this modern world, many spouses are likely to have children late in life because some believe having children in their thirties or forties would help them to raise their children decently. To be more specific, some people may find it hard to find well-paid jobs when they are young, which help them to stay stable in life. They believe if they gave birth for their offspring when they are still in their twenties, they would have more concerns to worry about, apart from jobs and money. Furthermore, because of their youth, they would be inexperienced and have less knowledge in taking care of children. Many men and women afraid that they would nourish their offspring in an inappropriate way, which may adversely affect the process of growing up of their kids.
However, I would argue that these advantages are outweighed by the drawbacks. If many people followed this trend by delaying birth, this would have an unfavorable effects on the population structure of the world, especially the labor workforce. To explain this is that when the retirement rate increases, there would not be enough young people to take up the work of such previous people, which lead to the bad of economy of one country. Besides, some women might encounter difficulties in giving birth for their offspring because of the malfunction of their wombs. Therefore, they will have to pay a huge amount of money to treat their physical health.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the disadvantages of this development are more considerable than its advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 673, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an inappropriate way" with adverb for "inappropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...that they would nourish their offspring in an inappropriate way, which may adversely affect the process...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...g birth, this would have an unfavorable effects on the population structure of the worl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91946308725 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59515544127 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536912751678 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0003287296 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303858820499 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11251420119 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783543532246 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214985345537 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701522062605 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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