Many people are spending a lot of money on their weddings.
Do you think it is a good thing?
Marriage is the occassion that involves not only bride and bridegroom,but their entire family come together to be one. It is an event of making memories with each other,relatives,family and friends.This also takes out many emotions at a time like joy,laughter and crying.Taking in mind all these factors,it has become a trend to spend a huge amount. Here,we will discuss both,good and bad.
To begin with,it is totally an individual's choice to decide how the wedding will take place. In earlier times, there was no concept of music, DJ and playing games before the beginning of marriage. Now, the scenario has changed completely. For example, women tend to spend more on "Henna" design in hands and legs to look great in a best possible way. Also, many want to show off by adding variety of international cuisines in their menu,without thinking its consequences. To elaborate further, kids and elderly people are not acustom to mexican or italian food items. When more than half of the population is starving,to add food items more than need is not at all a good choice.
Caterers use disposable plastic plates and glasses which in later stage pollutes the environment. These plates contain unconsumed food that gets thrown away with plates that ultimately harm our surrounding.
Apart from that, DJ's and music have become essential part of the function, which is not bad. This makes a lifetime memory to cherish. But again,an event organisers take full advantage of this occasion by charging at a higher rate.
To conclude, it is not wrong to spend certain amount of money in wedding, but the amount should be spent consciously in a way that it becomes boon for someone. If there is a left over food, then it should reach to needy. Along with your happiness;someone else will also be happy this way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, apart from, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98360655738 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97380121805 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659016393443 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3724416755 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121971588475 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286466331755 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346674175403 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510517416123 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478866112696 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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