Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Security and artistic culture and influence are an essential part of any nation. Each of the spectra has its own pros and cons. Therefore, under some given conditions, it is the duty of the government to equally invest in both the areas of arts and military. But there do exist scenarios where investing more in any one of them becomes crucial. Therefore I partially agree with the author's claim that governments should invest as much in arts as they do in the military.
My viewpoints are aptly illustrated through the below-mentioned examples.
Firstly, arts have a significant role in preserving the culture and heritage of the nation. Further, art influences reforms in the nation and can help change the mentality of the people. For instance, several contemporary art forms have been introduced in India which are deriving their ideas from the renaissance period. The ideas used in these paintings are helpful in preserving the dying culture of the people and as well as enlightening them. For instance, in India, many artists have made paintings depicting the daily life of ancient India and portraying incidents from the famous collection of religious text called 'Bhagwad Gita'. These paintings help in imparting morality among the people. Further, many dramatic forms of art such as theatres and movies are introducing several topics that attack the cherished beliefs of child marriage and girl-child abortion that are prevalent in rural India. Thus, these types of art forms help in spreading awareness among the people and change their narrow outlook and thus bring reforms in the society. Therefore, it is important for the government to invest in arts as it is beneficial for the entire nation.
In addition to this, sometimes, in case of a national emergency or when a nation is under any threat, it becomes extremely important for the government to put in some extra investment into the military. Taking some extra efforts in improving the military can thus help in strengthening the security of the nation. Moreover, when a particular nation has a low economy and is under some constant threat of any external military force, then they have no option but to invest their budget more for the military. However, the government should not get under the 'mad race' of the nations to collect ammunition in order to boast about their military strength. The government has the responsibility to prioritize the security of the people and hence must make decisions that would always lead to the development of the society
To sum up, when the nation is financially and economically stable, the government should equally devote its investment to both art and the military as art contributes to create reforms in the society and preserve the cultural heritage of the people and the military strengthen the security of the nation. However, in some cases of national emergency or threat, it becomes necessary for the government to invest more in the military. Therefore, the government should decide its contribution to both arts and military according to the situation but none of them should be neglected as both of them are beneficial for the country's progress.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ore in any one of them becomes crucial. Therefore I partially agree with the authors clai...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2653.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 521.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09213051823 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78527151439 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449136276392 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 849.6 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.7633805188 60.3974514979 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.590909091 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6818181818 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185168259164 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580993670835 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602872620602 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101781638216 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585619220058 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ore in any one of them becomes crucial. Therefore I partially agree with the authors clai...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2653.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 521.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09213051823 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78527151439 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449136276392 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 849.6 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.7633805188 60.3974514979 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.590909091 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6818181818 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185168259164 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580993670835 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602872620602 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101781638216 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585619220058 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.