Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned.
Discuss the main arguments for this statement and give your own opinion.
Unfortunately, animal competitions have been continuing for ages ago. Since the communities are being civilized, a heated debate has been sparked on whether this trend should be maintained. In the following, the reasons for two groups of people have been discussed.
On the one hand, a few individuals agree with this trend for two main reasons. Firstly, they believe that blood sports can be profitable. In fact, during such competitions, winners would achieve various prizes Such as a large amount of money. Apart from that, numerous fans would be participated in these races to take a gamble on winning their favorite animals. Undoubtedly, it can be lucrative for both fans, participants, and the owners of such races. Furthermore, animal sports make an amazing and entertaining time for people. As a matter of fact, a myriad people especially youngsters would like to have fun and adventurous activities. Young adults are able to enjoy and drain their energies in animal sports.
On the other hand, some others opposed these events. As for some reasons to support their views, firstly, they opine that animals have rights as human beings do. To explain more, they argue that animals feel pain and suffering as humans do. In fact, they may suffer to fight with their peers and thus it is not fair to force them to fight together during competitions. In addition, such competitions might increase the range of violence and crime in society. Indeed, some psychological evidence has shown numerous horrible and violent events including blood sports, online games and even some movies can raise rudeness behaviors in the community.
To conclude, although individuals need to satisfy their needs such as gaining money and making leisure time in their lives, it should not be overlooked that animals also need to live and enjoy as humans do. They do not deserve to be exploited for providing human necessities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...loited for providing human necessities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, look, may, so, thus, apart from, as for, even so, in addition, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11821086262 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71586918907 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58785942492 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4432865414 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3157894737 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.10526315789 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213083798126 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681696468589 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562608405564 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12983411183 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523305328129 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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