Many people believe that social networking sites(such as Facebook) have had a huge impact on both individuals and society. to what extent do you agree?
Over the past decade, Social Networking sites have become an integral part of modern society. There is a long heated debate going on between various groups of people whether it is boon or curse to mankind. I will be discussing both the point of view and provide my opinion at the end.
Social media websites such as Facebook has got such deep roots in people's life that they would not remember an era of their life without it. There are many positive effects in current generation's life which includes connectivity with large number of people. For example, when we consider the time when there was not a single social networking website available, an average man would hardly know a thousand other people in his or her lifetime. But now in the age of social media, single user of these websites would get to know at least 1500 to 2000 people just on a single click of mouse. Such kind of networking help the society as whole by provide opportunities to people either career oriented or even finding new friends to improve their social life. Hence, connectivity is considered to a major boon provided by these kinds of websites to the mankind.
Although the list of advantages of social media could be overwhelming but, there is dark side of them that people should be made aware of in order to protect themselves by not falling prey to any negative effects of them. Wasting time on social media is one of the major drawbacks that we are facing in present time. These sites are so addictive that people tend to spend their valuable time on their phone scrolling through them. We are already a generation of people where everyone is time poor, and we cannot afford to waste such precious thing just sticking to the phones on these websites. Statistic data are now available which portraits that average user of these website spend almost 7-8 hours of their day scrolling through different application such as twitter, Facebook and Instagram.
Hence, after having discussed both the aspect of social media websites my opinion is that we can use these websites for our betterment but with a cap on the time we spent on them. Everything can be used for our benefit unless and until we understand the overall impacts on one's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
...re are many positive effects in current generations life which includes connectivity with l...
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Line 5, column 666, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this website' or 'these websites'?
Suggestion: this website; these websites
...le which portraits that average user of these website spend almost 7-8 hours of their day scr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, at least, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74293059126 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42721989844 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542416452442 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7804903633 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.3125 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3125 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181573184173 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607952444367 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412762373658 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108701745191 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334888985654 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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