Some people think that public libraries are not neccessary whereas others believe they are essential for people
Public libraries play a vital role in a modern life. Naturally, public libraries have a powerful influence on the way we live and their effects are often positive. It seems public libraries provide people with a suitable source by which they can expand their horizons. The present essay aims to discuss that public libraries is effective for at least three main reasons.
First and foremost, public libraries can be very helpful to those people who want to increase their knowledge of outside the world. For one thing, there are different resources in public libraries that all people from all walks of life can access to them. For example, current developments in public libraries in developing countries indicate that there are many books in science, medicine, art and so on. Another thing is that there are lots of facilities and social gatherings in libraries that people can use them to get information about new technology, high-tech gadgets. As an illustration, people from different ages go to these places during their free timds to read newspapers and magazines.
Second,it is generally admitted that public libraries improve economy. In the first place,people who want to access to books and articles should pay money monthly or annually . Therefore, it can be beneficial financially. An example may help clarify the point . In Europe, public libraries get money from people who want to lend books from them while government spends that budget on modernizing resources in best way. In the second place ,manu local people can get a job in libraries specially among young people. In fact ,public libraries are a golden chance for workforce to find a job. All in all , public libraries can be adventurous for society and people. Also, public libraries have great effects much more than we think they do such as health, education and so on.
The last but not least, public libraries can enhance people's live in positive ways. Professor Smith the head of science department at Berlin university asserts that public libraries cause people to save their money instead of buying books from bookstores. In 1990,many Japanese university students could collect lots of money for charities by borrowing books from public libraries. The latest figures released by the World Health Organization (W.H.O) reflect that about 78 percent of people around the world read electronic books from websites of the public libraries during Corona lockdown. In other world, publice libraries have beneficial during pandemic.
To sum up,it can be stated that public libraries are positive for at least three main reasons. However, the question is that can public libraries improve the health and happiness of the new generations in general? Only time will tell,but in the meantime public libraries continue to influence every aspect of every day lives.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2376.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 458.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18777292576 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61747442294 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528384279476 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 733.5 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0480665343 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3846153846 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.65384615385 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345430375892 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11276103647 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499034097888 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224788682772 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435947927222 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.