More and more children in developed countries is becoming overweight discuss the causes and solution.
Obesity is the major problem of people and in developed countries more and more children are becoming overweight. This essay will highlight what are the reasons and some potential measures to resolve it.
To comments with, there are two main reason behind this situation. The prominent cause, is junk food. In this modern epoch, more and more people prefer to eat junk food. In this case, children also like to eat fast food which is not beneficial for children's health. Apart from that, they prefer to eat junk food more than traditional food. As a result they are becoming overweight day by day. In addition to that, social media also effects on children, because children mostly spend their time on electronic gadgets such as computers, televisions and mobile phones. They do not take part any outdoor activities like football, hockey and so on. Another reason is that, some modern schools give a lot of homework to children. In this case, children always busy with their books or study.As a result, they become bookworm and they have not enough time to play. So, they do not handle the pressure of over work. Consequently, they become overweight and face the obesity problems.
On the other hand, there are several solution to handle this problem. First of all parents should make healthy tradition food for their children, So that, they do not face this problem. Secondly, teachers should give less homework and also should on encourage to children part in sport activity and other curriculum activity. Moreover, parents should also set a limit to use electronic gadgets for their children and also give motivation to children for do some exercise, yoga, walk and so on.
To recapitulate, obesity is major concern of individuals. There are many causes of this issue such as excessive consumption of fast food, lack of physical activities and social media as well as electronic gadgets whereas there are some solution to tackle this trouble like having traditional food rather than junk food and do some exercise, yoga, meditation, morning and evening walk. Apart from that, parents and teachers should encourage to children part in sport activities.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t junk food more than traditional food. As a result they are becoming overweight d...
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Line 2, column 452, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., social media also effects on children, because children mostly spend their time...
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Line 2, column 786, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...n always busy with their books or study.As a result, they become bookworm and they...
^^
Line 2, column 977, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erweight and face the obesity problems. On the other hand, there are several sol...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'several solutions'.
Suggestion: several solutions
...oblems. On the other hand, there are several solution to handle this problem. First of all pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, apart from, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04481792717 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51478534758 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481792717087 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.1684493917 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7619047619 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.80952380952 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234848608982 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078066000859 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119914488471 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17230670798 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1263207646 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t junk food more than traditional food. As a result they are becoming overweight d...
^^
Line 2, column 452, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., social media also effects on children, because children mostly spend their time...
^^
Line 2, column 786, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...n always busy with their books or study.As a result, they become bookworm and they...
^^
Line 2, column 977, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erweight and face the obesity problems. On the other hand, there are several sol...
^^^
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'several solutions'.
Suggestion: several solutions
...oblems. On the other hand, there are several solution to handle this problem. First of all pa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, apart from, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04481792717 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51478534758 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481792717087 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.1684493917 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7619047619 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.80952380952 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234848608982 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078066000859 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119914488471 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17230670798 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1263207646 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.