2 Free style someone i admire An influential person

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     In our life , most people have an idol s...
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     In our life , most people have an idol such as a sing...
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...ost people have an idol such as a singer , an actor , a billionaire and so on in t...
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...have an idol such as a singer , an actor , a billionaire and so on in their mind. ...
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..., a billionaire and so on in their mind.  They admire their idol because of their ...
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...e of their idols lifestyle and qualities . Someone I  admire is my mother due to h...
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...dols lifestyle and qualities . Someone I  admire is my mother due to her love and ...
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... love and sacrifice for family members     She has not ever enraged with us . Inste...
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...rs     She has not ever enraged with us . Instead of compassionate , tolerance th...
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...raged with us . Instead of compassionate , tolerance that I am able to get from he...
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...tolerance that I am able to get from her . The vase which I broke when i was 6 age...
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...The vase which I broke when i was 6 ages , and my mom was afford of me because I m...
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...roke when i was 6 ages , and my mom was afford of me because I might have some injurie...
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...of me because I might have some injuries . Since this moment , she has thrown all ...
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...t have some injuries . Since this moment , she has thrown all of glass vases , and...
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...ment , she has thrown all of glass vases , and she used  plastic vases in the hous...
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...thrown all of glass vases , and she used  plastic vases in the house . In short , ...
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...and she used  plastic vases in the house . In short , all of my mistake which i ma...
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...d  plastic vases in the house . In short , all of my mistake which i made , but sh...
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...se . In short , all of my mistake which i made , but she never has enraged .    ...
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...n short , all of my mistake which i made , but she never has enraged .     In add...
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...which i made , but she never has enraged .     In addition , she makes me  feelin...
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...h i made , but she never has enraged .     In addition , she makes me  feeling due ...
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...she never has enraged .     In addition , she makes me  feeling due to her an act...
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...nraged .     In addition , she makes me  feeling due to her an action . Most grea...
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...e makes me  feeling due to her an action . Most great food she gives to me is deli...
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...great food she gives to me is delicious.I almost get good everything from my moth...
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...lmost get good everything from my mother . She always minds family members more th...
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... than her which make me love her so much .For example, During the Lunar New Year, ...
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...han her which make me love her so much .For example, During the Lunar New Year, my ...
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...ut she forgets to buy for her. To sum up , the sacrifice of her can not discride b...
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...crifice of her can not discride by voice , words . It is sacred and sublime.     ...
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...of her can not discride by voice , words . It is sacred and sublime.     In concl...
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...ce , words . It is sacred and sublime.     In conclusion , most mothers in the word...
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...s sacred and sublime.     In conclusion , most mothers in the word are respected ...
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...d and admired because of their qualities . I hope other people also mind like me ,...
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... . I hope other people also mind like me , and my mother is idol who i admire and ...
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...ind like me , and my mother is idol who i admire and love a lot .
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...ther is idol who i admire and love a lot .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30612244898 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41788319033 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2593143411 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9166666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0808955516004 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333818159229 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417930616001 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638544446753 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617517929272 0.056905535591 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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