Nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the seasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
Without having doubts, a majority of individuals give birth to their infants after long time in their life. This essay will examine the caused by taking a gap, such as make responsible and even sufficient money along with deterimented effects on people and society.
To begin with, the most salient reason behind taking a long time to give birth to their babies. To explain it, in many part of the world, people are surviving their life below poverty line, so they are not able to have children later in their life. As a result, they start hard working after marriage, they want to earn sufficient money for their children however, some big cities people do a lot of spend time with their couple after marriage, and they can say if they understand with life partner feelings and emotions, they decide to take children after long time.
Turning to the effects, one of the main negative effects of this phenomenon is that some individuals get perplexed regarding to choosing an appropriate correct time to take a babies but at the same time age difference is too long as well as in some cases baby may be weak and unhealthy.
In addition to this, sometimes people do not have chance to give birth. For example, doctor give advice to people if women age is too long, they cannot take child because at that time females physically weak.
In conclusion, some people do have a lot of responsibilities in their life and lack of money, they cannot give birth a child. However, may individuals spend a lot of time with their life partner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun part seems to be countable; consider using: 'many parts'.
Suggestion: many parts
...irth to their babies. To explain it, in many part of the world, people are surviving thei...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a baby' or simply 'babies'?
Suggestion: a baby; babies
...ing an appropriate correct time to take a babies but at the same time age difference is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68148148148 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46101008627 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52962962963 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7740057197 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.4 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195496676896 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100179906618 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760490873704 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117374928829 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679164469603 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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