It is believed that people’s health will be worsening in the future than it is today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
health problem is a main concern in person's life, it is extremely more important than others such money, education, etc. not only is it essential to people, but also it is a crucial problem to government, science. Therefore, to last people's lives, the official will put plenty of their heart into study and event more new methods or technology. eventually, I believe that people's health will be better and better in the future.
The first reason is that people are the main human resources in country development. as a result, people are one of the priority factors to create and explore all fields. if human doesn't exist in the earth, all activities and innovations or development will become meaningless. Prior to maintaining the sustainable country, it is necessary for government to invent variety of useful medicines and effective methods in healthcare.
the second evidence is that there are laboratory and studying science and healthcare service have appeared more and more recently. the government focused on investing in building hospital and training a high quality doctor, which all look forward to proving a perfect enviroment and health life.
in conclusion, it is sure that people's health would be improved in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16417910448 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80668457085 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4970637896 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.3636363636 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175306155471 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064845796551 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718340892199 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106242815375 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659113628343 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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