In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In several countries, the age gap between parents and their children is increasing more significant today than it was in the past. From my perspective, this phenomenon could create certain drawbacks, but I conclude that its merits are weightier.
On the one hand, few drawbacks have arisen from the wider age gap between parents and children. Indeed, as the age difference grows larger, it can be seen that the parents and their offspring may share a variety of different figures, such as hobbies, opinions, and even life attitudes. Consequently, family conflicts can occur among family members, which may cause tension, or even worse, collapse and disconnection in family relationships. For instance, before the National High School Examination graduation, children will face a dilemma about attending either social science or financial universities. Assume kids decide to attend a social science university because they will evaluate their future career and work based on their personal preferences. However, their parents contradicted them because they had a preconception about this major and persuaded their sons or daughters to enroll in a financial university associated with high income and stability in the future life. This situation could be an obstacle to the in-depth mutual misunderstanding between them, and thus, eventually, lead to animosity and a lost parent-and-child bond.
On the other hand, it is said that having a distant space between parents and children's ages has some noteworthy effects. First and foremost, this life option is favorable for the parent's better preparation for parenting. At a greater age, parents tend to be more psychologically ready to raise their kids with substantial life experience accumulated. Compared to young parents who chose to have children earlier, they may not have been well prepared to take care of their children, and hence, they may have encountered more social difficulties in interpersonal relationships and at work. Furthermore, this approach is also desirable for laying a solid foundation to guarantee the quality of life for both parents and their sons or daughters. Due to a surge in the economy, the standard of living and social requirements are rising, making life more complicated. Therefore, it is true that instead of giving birth to a child soon after graduation or starting work, numerous years of career development are more likely to bring one a stable and rewarding income to support the young family members with better food, healthcare, and education.
In summary, despite the deficiency that a wider age gap can bring, I consider that this phenomenon still benefits as children will experience a higher standard of living and parents can educate them in a good way. Nevertheless, both parents and their offspring need to create an open two-way communication channel and try to think from each other's angles and listen patiently to others' perspectives to avoid some awkward situations which can create conflicts. If they can do it, a harmonious family relationship can still be maintained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in summary, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 29.0 10.4138276553 278% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2610.0 1615.20841683 162% => OK
No of words: 485.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38144329897 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18848096798 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 176.041082164 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550515463918 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 803.7 506.74238477 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6976914775 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9444444444 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188959982054 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066055574683 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719731823238 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126691512483 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359286001855 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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