Young couples nowadays prefer to have fewer children than previous generations. Most of them prefer to accomplish other goals in their life first.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Today, there is less intention among young couples to have more than two children as they want to focus on some other goals to become successful in their life. In the following, I will discuss my positive view about this event.
The most important reason behind this is that youngsters have enough time to accomplish their aims. To explain vividly, individuals are able to spend more time to work in the company or their own business. In this way, they are able to get promotion in their job. Moreover, they have enough time to follow their interest in their leisure time. For instance, they can socialize with their friends, learn new skills including new language or playing an instrument. In general, parenting needs to take numerous responsibility as children need to be educated and nurtured.
Nevertheless, a few people have a negative attitude about this event. To support their view, they have mentioned the government might encounter some serious issue in the future. One of the main concern is about the declining of young employment in the future. Although this might be true to some extent, the authorities can resolve this issue with providing some facilities for immigrants and refugees. In this way, not only some amenities would be supplied for people from developing countries to upgrade their life, couples can spend enough time to flourish both their own talents and a few children they have.
To conclude, I am personally of the opine that parents should have a few children as two main reasons. Firstly, they can efficiently make them prepared for the future. Moreover, they also can personally progress in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01094890511 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5990039978 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551094890511 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0951505017 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248839916909 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837465524156 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608862898824 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162226505812 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589448791168 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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