In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can this cause?
More and more people leave rural areas and relocate to cities, which has been a prevalent trend in many nations around the world. There are various reasons for this movement and this also lay some effects on societies and individuals.
First of all, this phenomenon results from several factors, mainly in term of the difference of the employment opportunities and the diversity of amenities and facilities between two places. In cities, with a wide range of vacancies, people can find better jobs which not only offer them more considerable amount of income but also more competitive working environment where employees have to develop themselves to survive, receive appreciation and make better career progress, otherwise they would be left behind. Compared to living in countryside or suburbs, opportunities related to a person’s career are more noticeable. Moreover, another reason for this trend is due to its convenience of which non-urban areas can shortage. For example, it is difficult to see a movie theater, large shopping malls, modernised hospitals in countryside but there are several of them in downtown.
However, this type of change poses solemn problems to our societies which we have to face nowadays. First, when a great number of people flock in a modest spot, it will produce social tension or discrimination between the rich and the poor because there would be some individuals who cannot afford what they want such as a good occupation or shelter and some who can effortlessly achieve what they need. In other words, the society will become imbalanced. Besides, apparently, the level of population will increase especially in metropolitan areas. Many big cities cope with this problem regarding air pollution, noise pollution and water contamination from household, workplaces, factories or human daily activities. The relocation has aggravated the environment in many regions for the expansion of cities so that they can suffice enough space for migrated people.
In conclusion, for better or worse, the moving trend would continue despite some negative influences as people tend to perceive acceptable reasons behind their decision between rural life or urban life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...cieties and individuals. First of all, this phenomena results from several factors,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37101449275 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85101602513 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3313767731 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.357142857 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198234214683 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594890823658 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508955667828 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118074128655 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260806065528 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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