Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Unrestrained exploitation of natural resources has squandered our planet to a great recognition. Some people consider that the extinction of the species is the biggest environmental issue. While others argue that other problems such as industrialization, increase in global temperatures, pollution, etc are major issues faced by today's generation. This essay will discuss both the situations with my personal opinion.
Over the past few decades, the rate of extinction of species has paced up and is a quite concern to all. The main reason behind such a situation is unrestricted hunting of animals. Deforestation is the second major reason for the depletion of plants and animals to a great extinct. The greenhouse gases and the increase in levels of harmful gases such as carbon-dioxide and sulphur have negatively affected the health of animals and plants. To cite an example, the number of sparrows has decreased to a great in last few years due to increase pollution.
Other challenges faced are climatic changes and the increase in global temperatures. Furthermore, the industrial revolution and exploitation of resources have effectively polluted the habitats and destroyed the natural reserves, on which numerous plants and animals rely, consequently leading to their extermination. The global warming issue is making the situation even worse. If such rate of global warming continues, the time is not far when we would be standing at the brink of extinction.
To conclude, the annihilation of flora and fauna is a major problem faced by today's generation and it is vital to protect them. However, I believe that the roots of this situation are deforestation, pollution, and other environmental issues. Hence, these issues should be resolved first, which will indirectly lead to the conservation of the particular species.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Message: You used an adverb ('quite') instead an adjective, or a noun ('concern') instead of another adjective.
...tinction of species has paced up and is a quite concern to all. The main reason behind such a s...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41114982578 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18798384957 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574912891986 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5146578413 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178137004427 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520549179033 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453660445431 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106804778286 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647221837847 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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