The bar chart below shows the number of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants
The pictures give information about how many men and women attended 4 types of evening courses at an mature educational institution and the age group of them in 2009.
It is clear that the number of women outnumbered that of men in the all courses, with the exception of sculpture while the majority of students were the oldest group (50 or over) members.
According to the bar chart, the amount of female students exceeded that of male in three classes: Drama, Painting and Language. The Language class attracted 60 participants in total, 20 men and 40 women. Similarly, the number of women in Drama class was twice as many as men's, 10 and 20, in turn while the Painting had almost the similar number of male and female attendees, 25 and 30 respectively. Interestingly, only 15 people participated in Sculpture course from both genders.
In terms of age group, the proportion of senior people (50 or over) was the most active in these courses with 42%, while the students who under 20 accounted for mere 5%. The percentage of 20-29 and 30-39-age attenders differed slightly from each other, 11% and 16% in turn, whereas more than a quarter of students were 40-49-age individuals.
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- The bar chart below shows the number of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009 The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... attended 4 types of evening courses at an mature educational institution and the ...
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Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...umbered that of men in the all courses, with the exception of sculpture while the majority of student...
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Line 4, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eas more than a quarter of students were 40-49-age individuals.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82673267327 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72488217081 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618811881188 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7192872132 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.875 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279207620186 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115130515232 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103453305338 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17402835214 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126074899589 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.